Hi everyone,
I'm starting this thread to let people post their essays in preparation for the GAMSAT. If you have an essay to critique, post it here. Please ensure that you at least link to the essay if you are critiquing it (use "reply with quote" and delete the bulk of the essay - the second post is the format
Here's one I got the other day, from krypton:
An artist should not be influenced by the public’s judgement of his or her work.
Art is the means in which an artist is able to articulate their inner feelings without inhibition and therefore it is vital to not allow their beliefs to be changed by those who critique them. Creating art is an occupation for some whereas it is a hobby for others; however it still serves the same purpose of portraying intrinsic emotions that words simply could not suffice. In today’s society, there are a great number of critics whose sole purpose is to find faults in the work of artists and to publicise this fault to the community, nonetheless it is up to the artist to use the criticism to strengthen their own belief which allows them to inspire that belief in others.
Most of the great artwork is not superficial, they have a complicated meaning behind what the artist is truly trying to convey. Every detail serves a purpose, when analysed it provides an insight into the artist’s mind and expresses their view on life depending on the imagery, textures and colours used. For example, Kermit Oliver, a painter who is famous for designer scarves made for Hermes always painted animals, suggesting something towards God’s creations and his view on religion. His artwork is unique, no other American artist painted the interaction of animals and humans in the way he did, which made him stand out against the rest. Although fair few criticised his work, there are those who also marvelled at the details and the abstract qualities his painting possessed which enticed them to have him design scarves for Hermes, which are now sold for $7000-$9000. The fame and fortune were no interest for him, simply in his own words, “Give me a room with a good northern light, my books, my art supplies and a bed and stick some food under the door and I’m the happiest man in the world”. He did not rely on his art to provide the sole income for his family, therefore he was free to truly express himself and allow him to paint from the inspirations he draws from his memory. By being unique, he was able to inspire others to strive for individuality and not surrender to conformity.
Through art, many individuals have gained the inspiration they have needed to achieve great feats and to further progress mankind. Artists such as Eminem have been subjected to an enormous amount of criticism throughout his career, yet he continues to draw inspiration from the events that has taken place in his life and translated that into music, many of which have become platinum hits worldwide. In order to rise above the hate and continue doing what he loves he goes by the saying, “You’ve got enemies? Good, that means you have stood up for something in your life”. Moral of the quote suggests that you should gain strength from those who critique you and not allow them to devour all the creativity within oneself. Essentially this quote perfectly captures an artist’s true intention, not only to express their views but to inspire others to live their life to the fullest potential.
However not all criticism can be brushed away, especially if an artist relies on their work as their sole means of income. In this circumstance, the artist would have to take into consideration the possible improvements that can be made to address the issues that the critics have put forth while at the same time not losing the originality and identity of the artist. Such instances are often encountered in the music industry, for example Justin Bieber released his first song of his album only to receive a large amount of negative feedback and was considered a joke throughout the world. However he did not allow that to dissuade him from having a career as a musician, he seeked the advice of more experienced and established musicians and made the genre of music that was particular to a certain target audience. Through this ploy, he was able to gain success and eventually now he’s quite wealthy and famous even if there are those who still criticise him. It is clear how in some circumstances the judgement passed out by others need to be accepted and integrated into one’s own work in order to achieve public approval, which is vital in most Artistic industry in order to form a fan base. Nevertheless it is also vitally important that no considerable change takes place that distorts the uniqueness of an artist; the balance between the two is needed to optimise their career.
Creating art is a difficult as there are always those who disagree with what the artist is trying to portray. The true challenge an artist faces is not changing their own beliefs to please the critics but to use all the knowledge that they possess to inspire their own belief in the mind of the critic, in order to allow the critic to see from the artist’s point of view. The only way this could be achieved is to accept criticism and use it to strengthen one’s own belief, which will allow a greater clarity when trying to distil this belief in others.
I'm starting this thread to let people post their essays in preparation for the GAMSAT. If you have an essay to critique, post it here. Please ensure that you at least link to the essay if you are critiquing it (use "reply with quote" and delete the bulk of the essay - the second post is the format
Here's one I got the other day, from krypton:
An artist should not be influenced by the public’s judgement of his or her work.
Art is the means in which an artist is able to articulate their inner feelings without inhibition and therefore it is vital to not allow their beliefs to be changed by those who critique them. Creating art is an occupation for some whereas it is a hobby for others; however it still serves the same purpose of portraying intrinsic emotions that words simply could not suffice. In today’s society, there are a great number of critics whose sole purpose is to find faults in the work of artists and to publicise this fault to the community, nonetheless it is up to the artist to use the criticism to strengthen their own belief which allows them to inspire that belief in others.
Most of the great artwork is not superficial, they have a complicated meaning behind what the artist is truly trying to convey. Every detail serves a purpose, when analysed it provides an insight into the artist’s mind and expresses their view on life depending on the imagery, textures and colours used. For example, Kermit Oliver, a painter who is famous for designer scarves made for Hermes always painted animals, suggesting something towards God’s creations and his view on religion. His artwork is unique, no other American artist painted the interaction of animals and humans in the way he did, which made him stand out against the rest. Although fair few criticised his work, there are those who also marvelled at the details and the abstract qualities his painting possessed which enticed them to have him design scarves for Hermes, which are now sold for $7000-$9000. The fame and fortune were no interest for him, simply in his own words, “Give me a room with a good northern light, my books, my art supplies and a bed and stick some food under the door and I’m the happiest man in the world”. He did not rely on his art to provide the sole income for his family, therefore he was free to truly express himself and allow him to paint from the inspirations he draws from his memory. By being unique, he was able to inspire others to strive for individuality and not surrender to conformity.
Through art, many individuals have gained the inspiration they have needed to achieve great feats and to further progress mankind. Artists such as Eminem have been subjected to an enormous amount of criticism throughout his career, yet he continues to draw inspiration from the events that has taken place in his life and translated that into music, many of which have become platinum hits worldwide. In order to rise above the hate and continue doing what he loves he goes by the saying, “You’ve got enemies? Good, that means you have stood up for something in your life”. Moral of the quote suggests that you should gain strength from those who critique you and not allow them to devour all the creativity within oneself. Essentially this quote perfectly captures an artist’s true intention, not only to express their views but to inspire others to live their life to the fullest potential.
However not all criticism can be brushed away, especially if an artist relies on their work as their sole means of income. In this circumstance, the artist would have to take into consideration the possible improvements that can be made to address the issues that the critics have put forth while at the same time not losing the originality and identity of the artist. Such instances are often encountered in the music industry, for example Justin Bieber released his first song of his album only to receive a large amount of negative feedback and was considered a joke throughout the world. However he did not allow that to dissuade him from having a career as a musician, he seeked the advice of more experienced and established musicians and made the genre of music that was particular to a certain target audience. Through this ploy, he was able to gain success and eventually now he’s quite wealthy and famous even if there are those who still criticise him. It is clear how in some circumstances the judgement passed out by others need to be accepted and integrated into one’s own work in order to achieve public approval, which is vital in most Artistic industry in order to form a fan base. Nevertheless it is also vitally important that no considerable change takes place that distorts the uniqueness of an artist; the balance between the two is needed to optimise their career.
Creating art is a difficult as there are always those who disagree with what the artist is trying to portray. The true challenge an artist faces is not changing their own beliefs to please the critics but to use all the knowledge that they possess to inspire their own belief in the mind of the critic, in order to allow the critic to see from the artist’s point of view. The only way this could be achieved is to accept criticism and use it to strengthen one’s own belief, which will allow a greater clarity when trying to distil this belief in others.